Got around to going through what was left of the VN since last time, was not disappointed at all, except for the natural ones from the inevitable course of the story. Even if not in VN form, hope to hear more from these guys. REALLY like the day spent with hybrid!!! Those scenes were something I really enjoyed! ^/../^; That teaser there though... hrm... a matter of time! This truly was baradise!
Hey! ^^ i've already left a review of this VN, which i'm going to be changing now it's finished, but i would like to give you a much longer, and more critiquing review as well, as i would really like to point out area's of improvement and go over them. my 'official' review will be a lot more simple, and positive, because over all this was a wonderful little VN, but i do really want to talk to you about areas to improve.
Is there any way of contacting you privately to do so? (furaffinity?) i don't want to waste your time if my advice won't help, but, this could have been, one of the best NSFW VN's i've ever had the pleasure to read! It was... amazing <3
It is not good to have characters with Names that sound just like their Species, while it keeps things simple, it is also very Bland and Unoriginal. If characters are going to call other's "Boy" then characters also have to call them "Sir" back. This bound to be part of a translation error, but if a group of people includes oneself (MC) you use "Us" or "We" "Nosotros" not "They" or "Them" "Ellos" which means a group excluding oneself. While its great to have different facial expressions, they don't stand to convey much unless there is also a visible change in body language as well. If MC has a tail I don't see it or its not very noticeable like it is for the others. While all characters are mentioned to be hyper, there may still stand to be subtle difference in bulges, depending on length and girth let alone species, should you be opting for species specific ones. After a little more/further there is enough characters to compare, there are subtle differences and changing in where the light hits the crotch/bulge. To be clear is a Thong or Speedo? I don't think Thongs are made to hold bulges. And is that q Dev note to yourself there??? Hybrid? Who is a Hybrid? Hybrid of what? Would be great if the sprites had some environmental variations! X/3, but that can be addressed another time! Of course you had to put in THAT meme! XD
PBs can also be Canadian! or Scandinavian! ^^ That is better than being awoken by an Airhorn! But that isn't far off! HAH! XD MC doesn't have a hint of fat on him though!, and at least hose who do barely have any! (not that I'd mind any body type! drools) "Pink Rowan"? What is that? Her? Bulky Underwear??? No visual as to the turn on? Well I guess that part is optional... Removing the balls??? Need to rephrase and be more clear!
WoWoWoWoW!!! That shine!!! And yeah that one too!, though the third... that is very disappointing... hopefully you will redo that one sometime... I Skipped the first optional scene, because of reasons given by the selection, but hope can still get o do something with him still, and if not I saved it! X3 But this second one, this feels sort of right, not for me personally, but the circumstances are reasonable at least!
Seriously even the last names are their own species? weak... Wuffo!
I'll refrain from anything more, but you will need to comb over the English version with a fine toothed comb. Many... small... knots... blushes
I am one to apricate details, here and there more could be added, but you have at least a pleasing amount. I cannot expect anything to be very wordy, but you do take the time to pause and briefly describe the scenes that happen. I like how it also respectful/restraint perverseness, they all clearly wanting/suggesting something, but they at least want to do things the right way.
That # song seems interesting, all about just forgetting social media and its waste unless its something positive, something you are invested in, and something you are willing to support. Should only be focused on those you consider to be friends and to help uplift each other. Do I have the right idea/understanding?
I have to say this is very satisfying work here! There are some minor areas which needs some touch ups and of course obvious grammatical errors that result from initial translating of languages. None of it though really felt broken or was enough to lose meaning, it is honestly better than I expected!
Thank you for your comment. This is my first project of this style and yes, I am not a writer and I don't even speak English fluently enough to make a decent translation, I apologize.
About the bland names... well, I understand the point, although I try to make the characters, being so many, easily recognizable by their names, without the need to go back or things like that.
Although it may not seem like it, I put a lot of love and invest ALL my free time so that each update reaches the public in a timely manner, but little details like "rowan" sometimes escape me. For some reason, my translator interprets sergal as rowan (I don't know why, but it doesn't matter).
Again, thanks for your comment and I will take note of it for my future projects.
I really like your game and cant wait for the next update but i was wondering if i could get the name of the songs they are such a bop. And i love your character designs they are all hot looking and was wondering if you have a twitter account, furaffinity or some other account.
This game is a test project. For my future projects I want to add many interesting things. I will take the idea, as I find it quite interesting to explore
Hi! Since the game only has a scheduled duration of 14 days, it will not have routes. However, I am working on a mega project that will succeed Summer Days, which will have a longer duration and the implementation of routes. Thank you for play!
Vaya esto es mi primera vez que lo estoy jugando en español rara vez veo mas en ingles los juegos de VN pero esto que esta hecho por ti por todo el proceso y tu arte que realmente igual te sigo en telegram tu canal y twitter y la verdad esta genial es mas en español aun mejor esto si que es mejor. Muchas felicidades que hayas hecho un juego desarrollado por ti esta genia
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i noticed you released a second summer days vn, does that mean this one is complete?
Yes, the story is completely finished. Even so, the game has a couple of bugs and a translation that will be fixed in the future.
¿Está finalizado el desarrollo de esta VN?
En efecto, lo está. De cualquier manera pienso hacerle una actualizacion de mantenimiento en algun momento.
how i can skip?
Do you play on PC or phone?
pc
You can use TAB in your keyboard to skip
thank, ill try it asap
by the way, thank for the amazing vn, its helped me with the fuel I had to use, kinda I have more energy down than everything
I'm glad you like the project, really n.n
is there gonna be a mac version?
Unfortunately not for now since I can't create the versions and test them myself in case there are errors. I'm sorry.
Got around to going through what was left of the VN since last time, was not disappointed at all, except for the natural ones from the inevitable course of the story. Even if not in VN form, hope to hear more from these guys. REALLY like the day spent with hybrid!!! Those scenes were something I really enjoyed! ^/../^; That teaser there though... hrm... a matter of time! This truly was baradise!
Great things are coming as the guys take a break hehe
But wasn't THAT their break? X3
Just Cameron xD
if you fix that to make the reading more enjoyable would be amazing.
Oh, it looks like the game doesn't recognize the textbox in the Android version. I'll see what the problem is and fix it
Hey! ^^ i've already left a review of this VN, which i'm going to be changing now it's finished, but i would like to give you a much longer, and more critiquing review as well, as i would really like to point out area's of improvement and go over them. my 'official' review will be a lot more simple, and positive, because over all this was a wonderful little VN, but i do really want to talk to you about areas to improve.
Is there any way of contacting you privately to do so? (furaffinity?) i don't want to waste your time if my advice won't help, but, this could have been, one of the best NSFW VN's i've ever had the pleasure to read! It was... amazing <3
I'm glad you like Summer Days.
the link to my Furaffinity is here in this page, before the Download link xP
was just checking you where okay with me contacting ^^
Sure, no worries xd
will there be a mac version?
Not at this time. I don't have Apple devices to develop MAC or IOS versions.
It is not good to have characters with Names that sound just like their Species, while it keeps things simple, it is also very Bland and Unoriginal. If characters are going to call other's "Boy" then characters also have to call them "Sir" back. This bound to be part of a translation error, but if a group of people includes oneself (MC) you use "Us" or "We" "Nosotros" not "They" or "Them" "Ellos" which means a group excluding oneself. While its great to have different facial expressions, they don't stand to convey much unless there is also a visible change in body language as well. If MC has a tail I don't see it or its not very noticeable like it is for the others.
While all characters are mentioned to be hyper, there may still stand to be subtle difference in bulges, depending on length and girth let alone species, should you be opting for species specific ones.After a little more/further there is enough characters to compare, there are subtle differences and changing in where the light hits the crotch/bulge. To be clear is a Thong or Speedo? I don't think Thongs are made to hold bulges. And is that q Dev note to yourself there??? Hybrid? Who is a Hybrid? Hybrid of what? Would be great if the sprites had some environmental variations! X/3, but that can be addressed another time! Of course you had to put in THAT meme! XDPBs can also be Canadian! or Scandinavian! ^^ That is better than being awoken by an Airhorn! But that isn't far off! HAH! XD MC doesn't have a hint of fat on him though!, and at least hose who do barely have any! (not that I'd mind any body type! drools) "Pink Rowan"? What is that? Her? Bulky Underwear??? No visual as to the turn on? Well I guess that part is optional... Removing the balls??? Need to rephrase and be more clear!
WoWoWoWoW!!! That shine!!! And yeah that one too!, though the third... that is very disappointing... hopefully you will redo that one sometime... I Skipped the first optional scene, because of reasons given by the selection, but hope can still get o do something with him still, and if not I saved it! X3 But this second one, this feels sort of right, not for me personally, but the circumstances are reasonable at least!
Seriously even the last names are their own species? weak... Wuffo!
I'll refrain from anything more, but you will need to comb over the English version with a fine toothed comb. Many... small... knots... blushes
I am one to apricate details, here and there more could be added, but you have at least a pleasing amount. I cannot expect anything to be very wordy, but you do take the time to pause and briefly describe the scenes that happen. I like how it also respectful/restraint perverseness, they all clearly wanting/suggesting something, but they at least want to do things the right way.
That # song seems interesting, all about just forgetting social media and its waste unless its something positive, something you are invested in, and something you are willing to support. Should only be focused on those you consider to be friends and to help uplift each other. Do I have the right idea/understanding?
I have to say this is very satisfying work here! There are some minor areas which needs some touch ups and of course obvious grammatical errors that result from initial translating of languages. None of it though really felt broken or was enough to lose meaning, it is honestly better than I expected!
Thank you for your comment. This is my first project of this style and yes, I am not a writer and I don't even speak English fluently enough to make a decent translation, I apologize.
About the bland names... well, I understand the point, although I try to make the characters, being so many, easily recognizable by their names, without the need to go back or things like that.
Although it may not seem like it, I put a lot of love and invest ALL my free time so that each update reaches the public in a timely manner, but little details like "rowan" sometimes escape me. For some reason, my translator interprets sergal as rowan (I don't know why, but it doesn't matter).
Again, thanks for your comment and I will take note of it for my future projects.
I really like your game and cant wait for the next update but i was wondering if i could get the name of the songs they are such a bop. And i love your character designs they are all hot looking and was wondering if you have a twitter account, furaffinity or some other account.
Hi! I'll add the links to all the songs when I'm done with the game (about 5 more months or so).
Regarding my contacts, I have a Twitter account: https://twitter.com/RaptorArt25
thank you for your support! I'm happy you like my work
You're such a tease with the nsfw scenes... and i love it! haha :P
I'm happy you like it!
Read trough chapter one and its quite cozy. Loved the nsfw scenes and i really hope you can top and dominate everyone >:3
I'm very glad you like the game so far. I'm working on improving the character art and scenes, so you should keep an eye out for more to come hehe
Glad to know you're so passionate about it! But yeah as i've said,i really hope Cameron can top all the characters not only bottom for them
It would be nice to have that option with all the romance interests to be able to choose if you bottom or top, that way it'd work for everyone, imo.
This game is a test project. For my future projects I want to add many interesting things. I will take the idea, as I find it quite interesting to explore
Hey! Love the game, can't wait for more!
I am working hard to bring the following days, which I am very much looking forward for you all to try. Thank you very much for your support!
Really loving the results so far! Thanks for all your hard work!
Will there be romance routes?
Hi! Since the game only has a scheduled duration of 14 days, it will not have routes. However, I am working on a mega project that will succeed Summer Days, which will have a longer duration and the implementation of routes. Thank you for play!
I think it needs an option to change the font, it's very small and is hard to read, but nice game!
Mac version?
since I don't have Mac devices I can't work on Mac versions for now. Sorry
Im sorry to said this, but i have to said they all looks like they have balloons in their pants lol
I don't know how to draw, but maybe try making the bulge more like half a circle, instead of full circle attached to their body
But overall i like the story so far and their design, and especially their muscles and of course their breast lol
I'll keep your comment in mind, thanks
When's the next update? This vn is filled with hot guys
every 26th there is a new update x3
Vaya esto es mi primera vez que lo estoy jugando en español rara vez veo mas en ingles los juegos de VN pero esto que esta hecho por ti por todo el proceso y tu arte que realmente igual te sigo en telegram tu canal y twitter y la verdad esta genial es mas en español aun mejor esto si que es mejor. Muchas felicidades que hayas hecho un juego desarrollado por ti esta genia
Muchas gracias por el apoyo amigo! Seguiré actualizando el juego así que mantente atento ;3
Vale esta bien estare al tanto a la actualizacion VN UwU
Oh man, I wish there was an android port. I'd love to play!
tomorrow x3
Thank you so much, looking forward to it!
Android ?
Soon xP
¡Oook! I'll look forward to playing it :) :p
😍😍😍😍😍I’m An love with this 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Thank you very much :3
Daddys? They're so beautiful and hot in these screenshots
I'm glad that you like them ;3